中州张贺春 发表于 2010-9-9 22:39

了斋先生强力率意推出：魏体楷书6米长卷！

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葛良胜 发表于 2010-9-10 08:12

本帖最后由 葛良胜 于 2010-9-10 08:18 编辑

em1em1em1我觉得红色引首太局促，过度的颜色搭配的不好，用泥金肯定好些！

醒心堂 发表于 2010-9-10 12:19

观落款知先生是为手卷展而准备下了不少功夫，咱是很业余的学书人，只能就看到的而言，至于深层的意韵、神彩等等，咱说不出什么样。此作似可认为是现在倡导的今楷体。可能性是第一遍，感觉用笔有点稍快，急于想表现一些东西，失之于飘，字的繁简“钱、帘、拥”似可推敲，防止成俗字及混用，有些同字及同部首似可存异。流于表面的东西。如有不当请海涵。祝你好运！！1

jinyang123 发表于 2010-9-10 13:57

充满个性！——愚砚

寒巢___寒石 发表于 2010-9-16 21:45

老乡精彩,就是要教教怎样驳倒,什么叫不好好写字?
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中州张贺春 发表于 2010-9-16 22:34

回复 2# 葛良胜

    多谢指教。

高寒之 发表于 2010-9-17 16:09

有相当的功夫，看出临了许多魏碑。总体感觉不错，可能受一些时风的影响，这时风也不一定不对，就是容易成为泡沫。一点拙见

挥点小毫 发表于 2010-9-17 19:27

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中州张贺春 发表于 2010-9-24 20:52

回复 8# 挥点小毫


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